2. Reflection: Much like the first pitch, I was very happy to see that I had received some positive feedback from my peers on my final elevator pitch. Like before they gave me great comments on the feasibility and content of my idea and supported its necessity to the film industry. Also like before, I got a great smattering of constructive criticism that I found really insightful and am eager to put into practice in the near future. One of the best pieces of advice that I got was to again delve deeper into how I generate revenue. I was given the same critique after the first elevator pitch and thought that I had properly rectified it this time around, but from what I heard it would do me good to further elaborate. I was also told that my most recent pitch was far too long, which is totally true and I was able to fix it this time around.
3. Like I mentioned before, changing the length of the pitch and elaborating on certain points were the main takeaways of the critiques and is what I changed in this final pitch. I do agree with the prompt; I found that I had memorized the pitch at this point, that I had gotten very comfortable delivering the pitch, and that the pitch grew in overall quality.
This elevator pitch was really good as it worked on the issue of how you would turn a profit throughout the world of film producing, the fact that the pitch is nearly memorized is great, my pitch isn't entirely memorized in part because I didn't have a well defined a script. I will take some tips on how you've developed yours.
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ReplyDeleteThis elevator pitch started out with improvements and then quality started to decline as the video progressed. It seemed as if you were sitting down while giving this pitch, which in an elevator you be standing up. I feel like this is an idea you're passionate about. So, I encourage to in a sense pour out your heart to your 'investor'. Let he/she know that your idea is gold. I think your idea is innovative with lots of potential!
I love your idea, there should be many ways to help producers get their projects done. Funds are difficult for the part in the creation of the film because many people do not work for free, finding ways like kiva an international lender for solar panels would be great for the filmmaking field. Your idea is great and I hope you will be successful in your idea.
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