2. Reflection of Feedback: I was very pleased to see how well my last pitch was received by my peers; they all were very enthusiastic about the prospect of my ideas and how they had a practical want and need in society. They spoke of my natural enthusiasm and knowledge of the topic, which I was very excited about seeing that it shone through in my pitch. They also gave me some really good constructive criticism as well. The main piece being how I did not touch upon clearly enough how I would consistently generate revenue through my service. This observation was a great piece of information that I strived to include more thoroughly in my next elevator pitch. Beyond that, even though I got a lot of positivity, I am looking to polish my pitch overall the next time around so that I personally can be satisfied with my work.
3. Based upon the feedback I received from my peers, I sought to more thoroughly explain both the intricacies of how my product will work as well as how it will generate revenue consistently. I will admit to being more or less ambiguous in my first pitch, but I resolved to make my decisions more apparent in this pitch and I sincerely hoped it showed. No matter how many times I practiced the pitch, however, it was never as short as it needed to be, so I left it the way it is.
Your second Pitch was better than your first because it was alot more coherent and understanding with how your natural enthusiasm and knowledge of the topic. This video did a better job of describing how revenue would be generated from your business plan which was not clear from the other Elevator Pitch
ReplyDeleteLogan,
ReplyDeleteI have to say this video is better than your first as well. Way to make improvements. I did notice you went over 90 seconds though. Remember the theory behind this exercise is to present our ideas to a potential investor in an elevator. If this opportunity springs up, we may only have 90 seconds to talk to him/her. So the 90 seconds that we have to make the video need to be dense valuable phrases with a strong delivery. I look forward to seeing the improvements we all make as a group for the next elevator pitch.